Wednesday 22 June 2016

The Ravens Watch: Part 1 (short story)


Prologue


In the present time, in a city called Raven’s Peak, life appears to be no different than it is in any other city. In the city-centre, there is a bustling business district, complete with the usual hawkers and street hustlers.

On the outskirts of the city, there is a network of apartment buildings and lofts. It’s here that all the people who work in the business district make their homes. All of the buildings are owned by a ruthless and wealthy business tycoon, Gabriel Cruz. Cruz holds offices in the largest and most opulent building in the city, unsurprisingly named The Cruz Complex.

In the east of Raven’s Peak, there’s a place known as The Haunt, only vagrants, beggars, thieves and criminals reside here. They are a community of outcasts that do whatever they can to survive. They live by very few rules; in fact, the only thing that keeps these people from destroying each other completely is their leader, Blackjack Joe. He’s a man that would rather solve problems with a drink and a game of cards than with a brawl, but if someone gets out of line, the smile disappears and he shows them the darker side of his nature.

One of the apartments outside the city is rented by Rachel Davis and her 21-year-old son, Raphael. Rachel works as a waitress in a small diner near the harbour and Raphael makes money by working on the docks.

The Davis family never had much money and life was even tougher for Raphael because he had to grow up without a father. However, throughout Raphael’s life, Rachel did all she could to give him a solid upbringing, tempered with all the values, happiness and love that are so vital in turning a sweet boy into a strong and honourable man. 

Rachel’s husband and Raphael’s father, Tommy, also rose from impoverished conditions. He was born and raised in The Haunt. His childhood was a harsh and difficult one, but when he became a man, he worked hard and having escaped his birthplace, was able to open a small but respectable tavern near his family’s apartment block. He named it The Bird’s Nest.

One night while walking home from a busy night’s work at the tavern, Tommy was attacked, beaten and finally stabbed to death by someone the police described as a “street thief”, but when Rachel was called in to identify Tommy’s body, she found that nothing had been stolen from him. Raphael was five years old at the time and in all the years since his father’s death, both he and Rachel have wondered why Tommy was killed. Secretly, Raphael has a burning desire to discover who robbed him of his father, and why... 




A small apartment outside the city

I
n the city of Raven’s Peak, dawn broke much the same as it had on all the days prior to this one. Most people were still sound asleep, but of the few that were awake, young Raphael Davis was already in a rush. After all, he was late for his shift down at the docks. The last time he clocked in late, Mr. Anderson, the surly supervisor, threatened to have his job. So, after eating a hastily made jam sandwich, he headed west, taking a shortcut through the back-alleys toward the docks.

If he thought about it, Raphael could admit that he actually enjoyed the work he did. He felt satisfied when he went about the business of loading and unloading the cargo of ships. Raphael liked being part of a team, he felt good when he worked with purpose and set things in their proper order. Raphael was never one to hang around doing nothing. As a result, his tall frame was lean and muscular. He kept his light-brown hair tied back in a loose ponytail, his skin had darkened from hours of work in the sun and he was blessed with his mother’s fine features and emerald-green eyes.

After finishing a relatively light morning shift, Raphael walked across the harbour to a small, somewhat dilapidated and dingy diner. The rusty steel sign hanging from an awning stated, “The Fishhook, our great food and friendly staff will reel you in!” The food was nowhere near tasty enough to be called “great”, and the majority of The Fishhook’s staff had the people-skills of the utensils they cooked with. No, the sole reason that Raphael visited the diner after every shift was this; his mother, Rachel worked there as a waitress.

If what he did for a living made him happy, it was also true that knowing where and under the kind of conditions his mother worked made Raphael sad. He hated the fact that in order to keep the roof over their heads, she was forced to spend ten hours a day in this dump. The work was literally thankless, and the pay even worse. As far as her son was concerned, a woman of such strength and unconditional love, not to mention class, was far too deserving to waste her days in such a dreary place.   

The tarnished brass bell suspended above the door gave a faint ring as he entered the diner. Rachel looked up at the sound and smiled when she saw Raphael take his usual seat at the counter.
“Morning Raff.  Judging by the loaf of bread and bottle of jam you left on the kitchen table this morning, you’re either watching your figure, or you were late for the morning shift again.”
“You know me mom, I’ve got to keep in shape, can’t disappoint my legions of adoring female fans.”
Rachel finished stacking some plates she’d just washed, turned to face Raff with a playful smile and rolled her eyes, “These legions of fans must be as discreet as they are devoted to you, because I haven’t seen or heard of a single one, ‘til now that is.”
Raff put on an exaggerated frown and let out a mournful sigh, “You couldn’t play along for five minutes, could you mom?”
“And miss my chance to see you make that silly face? Of course not!”


After Raphael finally gave in and admitted to his hunger, he asked his mother for a cheeseburger with chips and a side of onion rings. After the meal was finished, he spent the remainder of the morning with her. At a quarter to twelve, Raff said goodbye to Rachel, left the diner and jogged out of the harbour district, across five blocks and into the bus station. He hoped he’d get there in time to catch the twelve o’clock bus back home. 

A little out of breath, Raff walked through the entrance of the bus station. As he passed by its high walls, he heard a deep and throaty sound. He knew what the sound was, had heard it all his life and sure enough, when he looked up, an ebony coloured bird was staring down at him with beady eyes. It was a raven, one of the creatures for which Raven’s Peak had been named. There were thousands of ravens nesting all over the city; they made their homes on window ledges, in stairwells, in the shade of chimneys high atop large buildings and in many other populated areas. The birds had no fear of humans and for the most part they caused no trouble and so, were left alone.

The large clock on the station wall told Raphael that he had five minutes to spare before the bus started on its route back to the apartment building, so he sat on a bench while he waited. Raff heard the engine cough into life and smelled exhaust fumes before he saw it pull out of the big garage at the rear of the building. The city’s bus line was made up of ancient, grey vehicles with rusted bodies and faded paintwork.  As he boarded it and greeted the rather shabby-looking driver, Raff thought to himself, these old rigs might not look so great, but they’re always on time.

After paying the ten-galleon fare for a full trip, Raff took the last seat on the left side It appeared that no one else was waiting at the station, so the old man drove out of the gates through which Raphael had entered and into the road. Raff watched as other vehicles, buildings and a dense mass of pedestrians passed by outside the window. The first stop they made was near a construction site in the business district where a new office building was being erected. Obviously, a shift had just come to an end, because a group of tall and extremely muscular men in work boots and faded overalls waited next to a bus stop sign.

As the bus wound its way through the streets of Raven’s Peak, it slowly filled up many different kinds of people. There were street hawkers, shop assistants, travelling entertainers, and some scruffy looking youths on their way home from school. Raphael was getting tired now; he really wanted to get home so he could grab a cold cider from the fridge and maybe watch an old movie on TV before he started making dinner. While it was true that being raised by a single mother made life tough in many ways, the advantage was that Raff had become quite handy in the kitchen. He was stirred from thoughts of food when the bus jerked to a sudden halt and the doors swung open with a hydraulic hiss.

He looked in the direction of the doors expecting to see an elderly person hobble up the steps, or a kid with an MP3-player clipped onto his belt swagger onboard. What young master Davis did see couldn’t have been any more different. Her long chestnut hair was held in a ponytail by a glinting silver clasp in the shape of a dragonfly. Her face had a calm and gentle beauty, with strong features, amber eyes, a button nose and full, up-turned lips which told Raff that this young woman didn’t hesitate to smile.

When he realised that he’d been staring at the girl for far too long, he looked sheepishly down at his knees, but as the bus began to move again, Raff was pretty sure she hadn’t spotted his rather creepy behaviour. He then noticed that she was standing in the gap between the rows of seats with one hand clasped around the railing suspended from the vehicle’s ceiling. The bus was full and none of the other passengers had enough courtesy to give her their seat. Without a second thought, Raphael got to his feet and walked to the front of the bus.
“Excuse me, would you like to take my seat?”
“No thanks, I don’t mind standing.”
“Come on, you know you’d be more comfy if you sat down.”
Her lips curved into an amused and curious smile, “Why’re you so desperate to lose your place?”
“Well maybe I feel like stretching my legs. Besides, my mom always taught me that I should never put my own needs before those of a beautiful girl.”
Her smile widened and she let out a joyful and bubbly laugh that Raff found particularly intoxicating. “Well who am I to disagree with such sage advice?”
As he stepped back to let her pass, the pure and floral scent of her perfume mounted such a powerful assault on his senses that his mind was suddenly consumed by thoughts of this casually seductive stranger.

Cruz Complex, city-centre

I
n an office on the thirtieth floor of The Cruz Complex, a man wearing a finely tailored black business suit and a dark-green silk tie sat in a luxurious leather chair behind a large and intricately adorned mahogany desk. Displayed on a slim computer screen in front of him were columns of figures and names. After checking all the data thoroughly, Gabriel Cruz smiled and leaned back in his chair. Now nearing his 51st birthday, Gabriel’s overpaid doctors told him that he should stop drinking scotch and that the Cuban cigars were destroying his lungs. To Hell with all of them, he thought, what’s the point of life without the little pleasures? He opened the third desk-drawer from the top and pulled out his box of Cubans. After clipping the end off of one with his favourite cutter, he picked up the gold-plated Zippo that he’d given himself for his last birthday.

As smoke slowly rose above Cruz’s head, he began to think about the things he’d done to achieve his goals. He supposed that many people thought of him as a soulless power-monger, but he didn’t worry much about that, because most of those people worked for him. Even if he didn’t know it, the Average Joe hotdog man standing with his cart twenty-nine floors below this very office was in the employ of Mr Gabriel Cruz. He was always amused by the idea that the so-called “good people” of Raven’s Peak called him a heartless profiteer and yet had no qualms about buying his products, working in his retail chains and most especially, benefiting from the numerous charitable projects that Cruz Inc. funded. Bleeding hearts, one and all.


Having finished the cigar, Gabriel got back to work. The day had gone quite smoothly. The deal he had been working on to absorb a rival company had been finalised after months of long and drawn out negotiations. Mostly due to the fact that John Adams, president of Falcon Industries, was a stubborn fool who refused to accept that his revenue stream had all but dried up. With this new acquisition, Cruz felt supremely confident in the belief that he was now the most powerful man in the city.

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[Part 2 will be up next week!]

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